Dear Editor,
The book was great! I just don’t think it was good enough to be on the college list. There are many things. Like how the plot wasn’t very challenging to understand. I also think it should’ve made it were you get attached to the character. Also, the plot wasn’t very exciting. Got to put a bit more action in it. Religion was a nice touch but I feel like it is a pretty touchy subject. Although the point of religion does add a nice touch. I honestly think that the challenging words and the talk a of religion are the only things that make it college list acceptable.
Sincerely,
Bailey Neff
Dear Editor,
I really wasn’t around for long to make the reader become attached to me. I feel like if I was around longer the reader would really feel the emotion of having to lose someone. I also think that it would help the reader understand the relationships and the conflict more. If I would’ve stayed around longer then the reader could make more connections to the people that they have lost and how their family reacted. Everyone has lost someone they loved so if the reader knew more about me and how I really was so they can really dig deep and understand the book emotionally and mentally. Thank you for hopefully taking my opinions into consideration.
Sincerely,
Jay.
A Death In the Family By Bailey 